Hi, I liked the Comic themed UI and the characters :) A little suggestion I have is less shadows on the character faces, the shadows add A LOT of age to a character, however, I'm a fan of people doing their own art instead of using free sprites :) I can't give an opinion about the story but I really liked Emily.
(btw: you are supposed to put the game icon in the first folder or it just shows the default Ren'py icon)
(and the october rainbow jam page needs more love; it's looks flat and boring :P)
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*sees that the characters are ace*
*slides in*
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Hi, I liked the Comic themed UI and the characters :) A little suggestion I have is less shadows on the character faces, the shadows add A LOT of age to a character, however, I'm a fan of people doing their own art instead of using free sprites :) I can't give an opinion about the story but I really liked Emily.
(btw: you are supposed to put the game icon in the first folder or it just shows the default Ren'py icon)
(and the october rainbow jam page needs more love; it's looks flat and boring :P)